I sing my self to Heaven
this tune is me
myself writ
in rhythms of starsurge
tides and gravities
of thought and emotion
self-sufficient
My brothers
and my sisters
myriad as stars
swim this tune alongside
our communion is this thing
called Heaven
and God our chorus
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Starsurge…the stars are in us…we are made with Jewels, so we must return praise, excellent.
“in rhythms of starsurge
tides and gravities
of thought and emotion” - beautiful
and it’s amazing how strong the rhyme scheme between line 4 “tides” and line 10 “alongside”; why, it’s heavenly..:)
I have an affinity with the otherworldly things, the ephemeral, ethereal, ethers….sigh.