On Watching You Sleep After the Bacchanal
Sated satyr, I sit and watch soft breasts
rise and fall with your dreams’ rhythms, ponder
love’s mysteries in my wine haze, wander
my own wilderness spent, drunk, and undressed
from wild rides through vineyards . . . You were impressed
with—what?—you fell giggling to lie under
my lust’s burning, ripe and lusty, wonder
of youth and beauty, all grace unsuppressed!
What of morning? My head will ache, cheeks burn
with something akin to shame, and my heart
might patter with some new emotion—turn
the page and write my life anew? We’ll part,
and you’ll recall me as satyr du jour . . .
I’ll be crushed by this upset applecart.
David M Pitchford
12 June 2008
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The last line rather beautiful . . . the image of the upset apple-cart.
Well done. I really like this one. And I always appreciate classical inferences.
Cheers!
Thanks for dropping in and leaving a breadcrumb, Richard. Hope your own creative endeavors are thriving!
David